Thursday, April 10, 2025

Dayswork by Chris Bachelder and Jennifer Habel

This morning I was once again denied access to "Some Psychological Reflections on the Death of Malcolm Melville" in the Winter 1976 issue of Suicide and Life-Threatening Behavior, so I stared out the window for a while.

So I reread the so-called "Malcolm Letter," written by an exuberant Melville on the occasion of Malcolm's birth--
I think of calling him Barbarossa--Adolphus--Ferdinand--Otho--Grandissimo Hercules--Sampson--Bonaparte--Lambert.

So I electronically consented to my child's remote participation in Freedom from Chemical Dependency Week.

So I ordered more masks, more disinfectant wipes, more birdseed.

So I ordered more dog food and more coffee filters.

So I went to the basemant to move the laundry and watched my husband affix a piece of wood to another piece of wood with screws and glue and the appearance of deep contentment.

So I took out the recycling and then the compost.

So I threw the ball for the dog.

So I compared various translations of a haiku about the cold voice of the autumn wind speaking through a crack in the door.

So I regarded a yellow sticky note on which I had at some point written the name of Melville's brother's clipper ship, Meteor.

So I noticed an anagram--remote.

And another--emoter.

A woman is researching the life of Herman Melville, perhaps to write a biography of him. It is deep within Covid's quarantine, and the work fills up a life that has been in other ways put on pause. She reads articles and blog posts about Melville's life to her husband, who helps her to speculate about the nature of Melville's relationship with his children, his wife, his job. Melville's life seems to have been a difficult one, especially the later years, after the bulk of his literary output. The narrator's life has not been exactly easy; she alludes to a moment in their marriage known only as "The Bad Time." Still, the house seems stable enough, though from time to time she goes looking for him--to share another scrap of what she's learned about Melville--and not found him. Later, he gets sick, and we perhaps expect the worst, but this is not that kind of book; the drama that was visited upon Melville--the death of two sons, the stormy marriage--is enough.

I've never read another book like Dayswork. First off, there's the fact that it's a collaboration between two writers, Chris Bachelder and Jennifer Habel, whom I assume are a married couple. The husband is at one point called "Chris," and so I presume, too, that something of the book is autobiographical (though how interesting to choose the point of view of the wife only). Beyond that, there's the ambiguity of genre and form: is it a poem? A biography? A history? A novel? A memoir? Bachelder and Habel weave all these threads together in a way that is virtually seamless. The reader moves, French door-like, from literary analysis Melville's life to the research process to the life of the narrator. From there it expands to  encompass other genres, other historical details; much of the research is actually dedicated to the life of another pair of Melville's admires, Robert Lowell and Elizabeth Hardwick. Lowell and Hardwick had a famously tempestuous marriage, as did the Melvilles; research seems to show that Melville was physically abusive to his own wife Elizabeth, as Lowell was cruel to his. Are we meant to read between the lines about the narrator's marriage, too? No, that would be too much, but I think anyone can recognize the way that the grand dramas of the page put the smaller dramas of one's own life into relief.

The climax of Dayswork is stunning in its touching smallness. The husband has been exiled to a downstairs room with Covid. Over the phone from the upstairs room, the wife reads to him from a letter that Melville wrote to Nathaniel Hawthorne. Melville gushes; he was famously besotted with Hawthorne, in a way that many modern critics have read as romantic, and a few as requited. The text is Melville's, but it's punctuated by small asides from the sick husband, some as minor as interested grunts or sighs. It's a scene that's made up of so little, yet its power is tremendous. Two partners, speaking across the physical divide of sickness and technology, speaking someone else's words, but together. It works especially well because we haven't been sure whether or not the "Bad Time" is over, or the marriage is really healthy or whole, but this scene removes any doubt that these two have reconciled and grown closer together. I was really in awe of it.

And I was in awe of this book. Though I'm not aware of anyone who's ever written anything like it, I have seen many attempts to weave together literary history and the personal in a way that feels similar (Jenn Shapland's My Autobiography of Carson McCullers comes to mind). And yet, this one works because Bachelder and Habel never force the comparisons. Largely, they get out of the way of the material, and let us make the connections ourselves, though the deliberate and careful structure of the novel clearly guides our understanding. Truly, I learned a great deal about Herman Melville. But more than this, I felt the way that great works of literature radiate through time, ennobling our ordinary lives for a brief time.

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